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My Last Is Now My First

December 27, 2011
By HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

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From the beginning to the end

I can't help myself from remembering them...

Their voice, their touch, their love for me...

I became broke and still am

A missing puzzle piece, looking for the right piece to fit into

Now that I think about it

I'm starting to heal

My scars are beginning to fade away

And

I am now opening my heart to you

I may not be able to get over the past

But...maybe you can help me create a better future

© Mick G., Bellevue, NE

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Inspired by my wonderful sweetheart :) love you hun
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HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:21 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Thanks :) it means alot
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:20 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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This is lovely...it flows really well, and i especially love the last two lines...beautiful. Very sweet
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 1:03 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 177 comments

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Theres so many that I can&#039;t pick sorry

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I love you too babe and I'm glad you like it :)
Skaterboilove said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 12:37 pm
Love you hun this is rlly sweet