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Lavender Bliss

January 3, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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A gentle whisper in your hands,
Sh... Time lingers; still and hushed,
Just...quiet.
Thoughts appear in the silence,
Begging, begging...
Another breath,
Barely heard above it all...
A stolen glance,
So many words...
Tempted to run....
Away!
Away!
But will they reach their destination?
No.
They remain only here,
Inside this agonized, spinning mind,
So sick with confusion; so ill by a fantasy...
Over and over,
It burns in my chest...
What are we?
What are we?

Or do we even know ourselves?

Silenced by a soft indulgence,
Tender and fleeting...
And again,
Again...
Amazement.
Longing.
Wholeness.

Are we still captured by the fear of revealing?

Night deepens and conceals the questions,
So many,
Oh, so many...
Unanswered.
But will they stay?

Still so quiet,
They dare to gaze...
In wonder,
Awe.
Our oceans meet...
So similar,
Familiar,
Beautiful.

Softly shining against the glow of moonlight...
Waiting.

A melody drifts,
So close...
Gentle,
So...
Caring.

Subtle sweetness brushes my lips,
Stained with violet,
I faintly hear the song once more...
Wanting to never forget,
To cherish every word...

Holding on...
Breathing in...
Letting go...

I open the door,
Hoping I've somehow now unlocked your heart. 

© Kelly K., Fort Collins, CO

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This is... Very intimate... That's the only way I know to describe it.... I'd love to hear your interpretations of it. As well as my other work(;
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stardreamer SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:45 pm
stardreamer SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
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this poem is amazing , ur a very talented poet :)
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:21 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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XD thanks Fire!:3
Mantequilla SILVER said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 6:59 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
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Ha, whatever. Don't deny your talent. 5/5 You're going to the mag if i have anything to say about it!!
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 4:38 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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yay! Thanks! :D
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 4:37 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thanks!(: and yes I will! As soon as I can!(:
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 4:22 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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But i liked some of your other poems! I have one as a favorite...even though it doesnt show up...And thanks! :D now that i commented on all your poems, could you comment on mine pleeease? :) You dont have to bother with the haikus, unless you want to...and lol yes it is wonderful. Even tho this poem isnt a favorite of mine, you reallyy do have talent!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:35 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Aw I had hoped everyone would love this! lol but thanks! All I've got to say is it"s my favorite... I think it's my most passionate, revealing poem... And you have talent too! ^^ I'm glad my poems make peole think and that they can't really describe them... I think that's wonderful (:
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 3:05 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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You have talent, you really do. A unique type of poetry-writing talent, since i haven't seen anybody else write quite like this. (But thats a good thing :) ) hmm...this poem is very.. "lavender bliss"ful, but it's not my favorite out of all of yours. still, 4/5 :)
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 2:48 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thanks!!!! ^^ This is probably my most popular one. I really wished this would've been pulblished...
the_real_irish_andy BRONZE said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 6:30 pm
the_real_irish_andy BRONZE, Clinton, Mississippi
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I really, really like this. Your great, written... I mean wow! So much depth.
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:45 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thanks so much^^ I like using words pertaining to the color purple(:
chloena_garrett GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:44 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
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At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.<br /> <br /> Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.<br /> <br /> A poem is never finished, only abandoned.<br /> <br /> Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

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oh my goodness written! I love this. I really like the part where its says "subtle sweetness brushes my lips stained with violet". You are a great writer! :D
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:19 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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XD thank you so much!:3 it's my favorite too!
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:13 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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This is my favorite, hands down! I really have nothing ele to say... Its magnificent, and i love it!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 10:55 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Aww well this was a single night thing, it won't happen again I bet..
Mantequilla SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 10:51 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
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My love life is dead, but this was really good. ;) Keep it up!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:19 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thanks!(: Thanks so much!
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:15 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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SOOOO PRETTY. i like the feeling the poem gives me about the color purple. LOVE IT
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:41 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thank you! I really don't understand how thinks so popular out of all the rest of my stuff
Silverleaf SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:37 pm
Silverleaf SILVER, North Vernon, Indiana
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amazing just amazing, i love it ^^