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June 29, 2008
By Continuum GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
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chance
you and
I could feel
for a passing
moment, closing our wounds with stitch by time;
to blot the fated – shaded memories
of our tale which
like arson
you have
fried.

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Iamwhoiam17 GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 2:44 am
Iamwhoiam17 GOLD, Lake City Fl, Florida
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I love this poem. Beautifully written! It is amazing! :) Please take and rate my poetry,I will appreciate it.
otherpoet SILVER said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 11:44 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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So well written :) for me, it brought happiness of good memories followed by something much darker. It evokes emotion. Awesome job!
SmileitsCaroline said...
on May. 7 2010 at 11:50 pm
this is simply beautiful. 5 stars.
WriTeR_625 said...
on Aug. 4 2009 at 6:05 pm
this is really good
known as em said...
on Jun. 29 2009 at 1:03 am
it good, more than good its great, its AMAZING!!!