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Perfectly Damaged

January 19, 2012
By maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn


Sitting in my wheelchair
My thin legs are strapped to poles
I’m stuck
Unmoving
I’m trapped deep in a hole

Each morning I awaken
From a wistful dream
Tears are streaming down my face
Dreaming of who I could be
I cannot move without someone pushing me along
Sitting in my wheelchair
To it I do belong

From the second I escaped
My mother’s womb,
The chord was wrapped around my neck
The smell of death enveloping
Like a silent tomb
The nurses and doctors running
In a hurried rush
My mother crying into her robe
My father saying
“Hush”
They did unwrap that dreaded chord
Just in time to keep me
But something was lost
Why do you care?
I don’t.
I’m still just being me

But actually the worst part
Is really not the chair
But all the lingering looks
And all the avoiding stares
Looking at the floor or wall
Pretending I’m not there

Sitting in my wheelchair,
Trying desperately to hide
My drooling mouth
And sagging eyes
Trying to make them see
The girl I am inside

Sitting in my wheelchair,
Dreaming of a better day
Where I will be on my own
Finding my own way
I shall prove to the world
That I can do it all
I can think
I can dream
I can shine
And I will take back something that is rightfully mine



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on Apr. 15 2012 at 12:42 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Just to clear things up, I was actually writing about a girl--- but no harm done. :)

I really appreciate it, thanks so much!


on Apr. 15 2012 at 11:03 am
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
33 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

Very touching piece; definitely relatable in a realistic not overdone kind of way. I felt like I was literally standing beside this man in the wheelchair and feeling all his pain. Outstanding job, keep it up!!!!

on Apr. 10 2012 at 3:28 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you so much! (Those are probably my favorite lines too... I was sitting there, thinking I needed to write something more, and that kind of flowed out of me!)

on Apr. 9 2012 at 4:12 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
17 articles 7 photos 131 comments

this is a beautiful poem and it speaks volumes. it's so well-written and it's so deep!

"From the second I escaped
My mother’s womb,
The chord was wrapped around my neck
The smell of death enveloping
Like a silent tomb
The nurses and doctors running
In a hurried rush
My mother crying into her robe
My father saying
“Hush”
They did unwrap that dreaded chord
Just in time to keep me
But something was lost
Why do you care?
I don’t.
I’m still just being me"

^these are my favorite lines!


on Apr. 6 2012 at 7:30 am
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Of course,  I would love to read some of your poems, thank you for the kind words.

on Apr. 4 2012 at 10:04 pm
Simply_Ciara GOLD, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
11 articles 0 photos 11 comments
This poem is written BEAUTIFULLY I couldn't put it in any other words. But if you don't mind I would love for you to read some of my poems and please comment(:

on Apr. 4 2012 at 6:50 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you!

on Apr. 4 2012 at 6:50 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you so much! I love a story in a poem too, which is probably one of the reason that I attempted to do it!

butterfly123 said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 11:42 pm
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
0 articles 0 photos 408 comments

hey! beautiful poem . it has a certain flow to it which i like . the ending is my favorite part. keep writing and great work :)

 


on Mar. 27 2012 at 1:00 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you soo much.
No problem, I loved your monologue!

on Mar. 27 2012 at 12:59 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you so much. I'm glad that this spoke to you.

on Mar. 26 2012 at 8:43 pm
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Smile now, Cry later." "everything happens for a reason"

Abosolutely beautiful! Also, thanks for the feedback on my monologue, "change" (: keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Ariya GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:46 pm
Ariya GOLD, Charleston, South Carolina
12 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some men just want to watch the world burn.<br /> -Alfred (Batman Begins)

This poem is really meaningful especially to me because my dad is in a wheel chair and I work with children who have disabilities.  I loved the power in the language and the emotion you bing to it.

on Mar. 12 2012 at 2:59 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you and AgentOrange. It means a lot.

on Mar. 12 2012 at 7:49 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I live for the nights I can&#039;t remember with the people I will never forget.&quot; -Carassisa M-&lt;3<br /> <br /> &quot;What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve.&quot; -Softball Coach Steve B-

This is beautiful, painful, and real. But the way you convey your emotions is elegant, and priceless. This is incredible, please give me feedback on so freaking numb. And some of my others, if you want to, but mainly that one. Thanks!

on Mar. 12 2012 at 12:58 am
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where.&quot;<br /> -James Clavell, &quot;Shogun&quot;

 I really liked this poem. Truly means a lot, which is most important.  Keep writing, and never slow down.

dreamshaker said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 5:34 pm
dreamshaker, Clarkston, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 64 comments
this was lovely - so sad, but very powerful.
I enjoyed reading it. You're very talented.

on Feb. 24 2012 at 6:09 am
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you so much!

on Feb. 23 2012 at 5:33 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you&#039;re not 1st you&#039;re last&quot;

wow this was just so powerful and real and beautifully written. I do think the stanza switching would make it sound better, but it's definitely fine just how it is now. great job!

on Feb. 22 2012 at 5:09 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

Thank you, and I see your point! I really appreciate your feedback!