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So carefully

February 11, 2012
By Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
29 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
When in doubt... Blame it on your siblings
when life gives you skittles throw them at random people and yell FEEL THE RAINBOW


Staring at the screen
Reading your words
Such carefully thought out lies
I fell futher and deeper than planned
Writing my words now
Letting you read
So Carefully thought out
So Carefully written on this page
Stained with blood and fears
Forget the memeories
Dry my tears
Forget the sweet times we had
I so carefully fell for you

I miss our times together
I miss your kiss
I miss all the happiness
But most of all, I miss you
Why did it have to end
Where did your love go
How could you lie to me
How could you just let me fall

Dreams of you haunt me
Seeing you brings me pain
All the words i thought were true
Turned out to be lies
All the love i gave
All the words i said
Those were lies too

The author's comments:
These were actually separate poems but my friend told me they sounded like they fit together

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on Mar. 7 2012 at 5:04 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

Yes it is :)

BrianaK BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 8:40 am
BrianaK BRONZE, Waterford, Wisconsin
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" Keep Believing"

IT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!

on Mar. 7 2012 at 8:39 am
Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
29 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
When in doubt... Blame it on your siblings
when life gives you skittles throw them at random people and yell FEEL THE RAINBOW

It isn't that great :)

on Feb. 20 2012 at 9:15 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 177 comments

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Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

BOO TO THE YAH BABY GREAT WORK!

on Feb. 20 2012 at 9:15 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

BOO TO THE YAH BABY GREAT WORK!