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February 18, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Pulling you down,
Can you surrender it all?
Tears sigh heavily,
As they...darling...
They burn...
Whisper against us,
Chasing the light,
Radiance beckons inside that pale blue sea...
Running towards a seductive illusion...
We are,
I realize...
Only a dream.

But don't let me wake...
Keep my heart still,
As you love me,
And sing once more...
Forever and ever...

You are Imaginary.~

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

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Just thinking back... And this appeared(: <3
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recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:58 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

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The recurring prevalence of sexual undertones makes me question the sanctity of this relationship. While beautifully worded I found this a bit hard to follow..
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:39 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

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Written, this one is so amazing, and I totally know what you're writing about :) its fantastic!
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:16 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 222 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

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I was totally imagining a dream the whole time. Another super awesome poem
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:18 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Thank you(: I don't know why I can't see the beauty of my words...
Rain. SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:11 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

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You seem to have this technique that not a lot of people have and that's that you're able to portray a lot of imagery and I just really enjoy that about your pieces.
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 8:12 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

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thats amazing i really liked it
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 3:18 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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This is really good. It almost seems like a fuzzy memory. Something that is imagenary. I like it alot, good stuff.
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 1:24 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Thank you ^^
LoonyLoopyLupin GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 5:34 pm
LoonyLoopyLupin GOLD, Raynham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I am proud of who I am. I believe in what I do." -Pavel Chekov (Star Trek The Original Series, episode: "The Way To Eden")

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I really like this. It's so delicate and simple, but you still got your point completely across. Amazing job. :)