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Black Roses

February 10, 2012
By kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo


Black roses create a labyrinth in my mind
The blessed way out I cannot find
Thorns of negativity pierce my soul
Inflicting pain on me as a whole
Depression overshadows my will
Leaving me with and unmistakable chill
Dark clouds cover my sky
Letting no glimpse of light get by
Within my mind a battle will rage
Forever playing out its tragedy on my stage
My aching heart will forever bleed
Until at last my soul is freed
When all this will end, I cannot say
But until that very day
This battle will rage on
All hope forever gone
Black roses fill my heart and soul
Sorrow taking an eternal toll


The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by someone in my life who I love. He is my everything and I love him forever.

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on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:53 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

i can't . j is in jail and things are all jumbled....

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:52 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

come over to day and we will talk i love u and have places for u to stay if u still want to stay here with me

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:48 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

hell no i want to be with u and no one elss ok i have fout for u sens day one so do u think i want to be over

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:45 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

i dont know what to think. my mom says that you asked for all your stuff back...  

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:41 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
1 article 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

no we are not over your mom is lieing just like she did to me yester day babe if i didnt love u would i have changed my face book states to in a relation ship with u

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:09 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

collin. you have until 8 tonight to tell me what is going on. either call or come over. but after 8 i will no longer communicate. i am confused and hurt. 

on Sep. 26 2012 at 2:39 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

wait. what??? wtf is going on? as of last night according to my mom we are over.....

on Sep. 26 2012 at 11:28 am
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
1 article 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

if not and u get this be for u leve just come to my house and we can talk babe ps your mom likes to lie dont she

on Sep. 26 2012 at 11:17 am
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i hope so to babe i will see u to day after my meding

on Sep. 25 2012 at 7:35 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

thanks...i really don't know how good it would have been had i tried to recite it. i am working on another poem....hopefully you will get to read it soon  

on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:36 am
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

Thank you! I wrote this for one of my friends who was going through a really hard time and he compared himself to black roses..so i wrote this for him. 

on Apr. 26 2012 at 9:49 am
GuardianoftheStars GOLD, Shongaloo, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Let's tell young people the best books are yet to be written; the best painting, the best government, the best of everything is yet to be done by them."
-John Erslcine

Very good. An enjoyable read :]