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Pains Angel

February 29, 2012
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


This crazed creature as black as smut.
It lurks out every ally,
every street in the night.
It hopes to find someone,
so powerless, so hurt.
It feeds on the pain of the lonesome and weak.
This creature is called pains angel.

If you let him get you,
then you will surly cry.
He will praise the pain he causes you.
He smiles in the faces of victims.
If you live through the pain he will bring;
you are truly lucky.
So don't let pains angel get you on a dark ally,
stay away from where he lurks for you.
But if you are weak and lonesome the pains angel will surly get you.


The author's comments:
"This is actually about the devil. As you should know the devil a long time ago used to be an angel in heaven as said in the Bible. But something happened and he now is no longer welcome in heaven."

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on Mar. 6 2012 at 7:29 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Thanks:) And yes, I sure can read and comment on your work!

Blaker GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 9:36 am
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
15 articles 9 photos 38 comments
I thought this was really nice. I think it could flow a little better, but the ideas are really great. Some of your wording was a little off, but I thouroughly enjoyed it. Would you read my work?