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What is This Feeling?

March 9, 2012
By NMazz99 BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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NMazz99 BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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If at first you don&#039;t succeed, then you&#039;r in good company.<br /> &quot;Do not be as slaves, who serve their master for the sake of reward. Rather, be as slaves who serve their master not for the sake of reward. And the fear of Heaven should be upon you.&quot; (Pirkei Avot)

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It was always great when we were together.
I never knew how to describe it; I called it friends.
But when we became distant i knew something was wrong,
This empty feeling inside, what was it? I didn't know

After all this time I know what it is; that void so big and empty.
It's that feeling you get when you really get close to someone.
That feeling you get when you really want to be with someone.
I finally know what it is.
Love

© Matt F., Pierz, MN

The author's comments:
This was thought of during the time that someone I was close to and myself were not really talking and avoiding each other. I hope that people find that person in their lives and to never let them go. I thank the person I found and have known for a long time and spent some of the happiest times of my life with. Thanks again for being there.
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