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Caravan of Thieves

March 16, 2012
By Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
11 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)


I envy the way darkness swallows you,
eating out all the light
Wishing
that your stolen shadow
would get up
and walk
beside mine



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on Oct. 8 2012 at 4:22 pm
NavyCopperQuill, Blank, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

This is a great poem! I love the short and sweet approach. Please write more because this is great!

on Oct. 8 2012 at 10:32 am
amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
12 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
I pay no attention whatever to anybody's praise or blame. I simply follow my own feelings.
-Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart

Love this poem! The words you chose really bring a deeper meaning to them poem! Keep writing! :)

on Oct. 8 2012 at 10:32 am
amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
12 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
I pay no attention whatever to anybody's praise or blame. I simply follow my own feelings.
-Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart

Love this poem! The words you chose really bring a deeper meaning to them poem! Keep writing! :)

on Oct. 8 2012 at 9:50 am
CallMeAria PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
30 articles 27 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON :)

Hi here I am!
I think this is gorgeous, it's short and sweet and the vocabulary is complex. the words just sound so good when they're said out loud, and flow really well. definatly keep writing :D

on Sep. 17 2012 at 2:12 pm
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
11 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)

Thanks so much!

on Aug. 21 2012 at 1:54 pm
k8husted PLATINUM, Central Point, Oregon
27 articles 3 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bliss Cavendar:(Whip it 2009) The last time I wore skates, they had
Barbies on them.

This one is now my FAVORITE!!! Short, but with so much feeling put behind it! Like Like Like! :)