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Every Heartbeat

March 13, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Teardrops scream so quietly; Breaking the promise to remain unseen...
Longing rests in my soul,
A dull, burning ache...
Dear, do you remember my name?

Reaching for your bright, loving stare,
Words held captive; 
Breaking with each breath...
Tell me I'm not forgotten...

Memories rush through my fingertips; Staining my skin with regret,
Holding such perfection,
Why, darling, can't you see it?

Such soft whispers,
Hidden within the melody,
Not speaking...
Again...
Oh, again...
Is it the silence that contains our love?

...Waiting for us to realize...

We haven't vanished yet.

And, with Every Heartbeat,
A secret is revealed,
Between you and I...
Until we are no longer tempted by the quiet...

...But instead, resisting to stay...

Haunted.~

© Amanda P., Clermont, FL

The author's comments:
About a memory I was reflecting on through my point of view, about a boy who helped me change myself and helped me shine a new shade of light(: Thank you...
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bookishrose said...
on May. 16 2012 at 8:15 pm
bookishrose, San Bernardino, California
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Lovely. (:  I can really relate to this.
TapTap SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:38 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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okay, THIS one is going on my calf, the other mirror thingy is going on my back, if you keep writing I'm just gonna be covered in words. Anyways, obviously beautiful poem, that's all i have to say
bloodroselove SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:30 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
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i really like this poem. the emotion is so deep. one word...chills
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:13 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thank you dear(:
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:12 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thank you so much(: ive realized that most of them are like that: intimate(: I really love this one myself(:
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:04 am
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I like your poems. They create a sense of intimacy very well. Especially this one. The last stanza I thought was the best  To me it seemed as if the poem was a promised transition to a more open relationship. Great work!
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:42 am
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Goosebumps.  Honestly, that is the only word I can think of that does this poem ANY justice.  (:
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on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:21 pm
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Again. I bow down to the amazingness emoutionalnes of thsese poems. See i am even making up words now for this stuff.
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Such a good job! I love reading your poetry because it is so complex and simple all at once. Such a goood job!
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 1:35 pm
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i thought it was very good i especially liked the first stanza :) keep it up
FleshRipper GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:18 pm
FleshRipper GOLD, Guilford, Indiana
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Your poems are always amazing. I loved this poem, it had such deep words and meaning.
SweetSandyFlower GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 3:59 pm
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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LOVE IT! great use of words!!! love the meaning and the feeling in it!
Dark-Ninja said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 3:58 pm
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!1
The_Poe_Project said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 5:31 pm
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Thats great :)
Jazzy92517 SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 4:35 pm
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holy crap! can we say talented much?
Rain. SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:33 pm
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This was awesome, loved the imagery
Moon_In_A_Cup BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 7:22 pm
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I love love love love this *fangirls* this is really powerful with a great rhythm!
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 9:29 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don&#039;t get anywhere are the people who don&#039;t dream of a better place for themselves...

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Thank you, dear(: I'm glad you like it! And I've realized that. But oh well... It's still awesome!(:
TapTap SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 9:26 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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*faints* Overwhelming beauty, beyond comprehension. Elipses are a bit overused, you don't need to trail off so much, the feeling is already present. Otherwise, amazing work. Soiul beaneath the words girl.
BriRose2014 SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:21 pm
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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i really love this.