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Gone.

April 4, 2012
By hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;<br /> To tell one&#039;s name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog&quot;<br /> -Emily Dickinson


A shimmer
A sparkle
A twinkle...

Gone.

Run to chase it,
the wind in your hair.
Once was found,
now is lost...

Gone.

But always run to chase it.


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on Jul. 4 2012 at 3:41 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;<br /> To tell one&#039;s name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog&quot;<br /> -Emily Dickinson

Yes, my earlier poems were much shorter than the ones I tend to write now. But every once in a while I try to keep it simple... Thanks for reading :)

AriShine GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 9:49 am
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Whatever you are, be a good one.&quot; -Abraham Lincoln

This is beautiful! I love the message, and I love the simplicity. Keep it up!

on Apr. 16 2012 at 7:47 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;<br /> To tell one&#039;s name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog&quot;<br /> -Emily Dickinson

Very true...I'll try that in my future poems. But to me poetry is all about finding your own meaning, so I don't want to give to much away.

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on Apr. 16 2012 at 4:52 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Beautiful yet an unclear meaning. Try clarifying what you mean to evoke more emotion and response from your reader, everyone loves a poem they can easily relate to a personal experience, especially if it's powerful.

on Apr. 13 2012 at 5:36 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;<br /> To tell one&#039;s name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog&quot;<br /> -Emily Dickinson

I'm mostly talking about my lost dreams that people put down all the time...but I still run to chase them.

Joshua. GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 11:00 am
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?&quot; - Hunter S Tompson

Dont really know what its talking about. But thats okay. Its just beautiful. :)