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Close your eyes and live in the world of what if

April 5, 2012
By Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
15 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I loved you once, I love you still, I always have, and I always will!"

What if we lived in a world where the planets all alien, or where ppeopleeren’t afraid to speak their minds. What if people never knew the word hate? What lovedidn't’t discriminate? What would happen if the kid in the cornerwasn’t a freak and ppeopleeren’t afraid to peak? What if kids never had to go home wondering when their food would be there so they might eat. What lovee wasn’t used for everything, like on food or a friend? How would people feel if they didn’t have a place to call home, and peopldidn't’t have to be alone? Do you think the world would end if everyone made a new friend? If everyone was nice how people suffice? The answer to that is they can’t anyone can be nice 110 percent of the time and to absolutely every one. It just can’t be done in today’s world. Because of some boy or some girl. What if we all hand someone to count on to be strong? The fact is that we don’t. We are lost with no hope. That is how the world is to day all hate no play no love no say in what goes on in life. Tough love there’s no fight!

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on Apr. 20 2012 at 11:51 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

You probably already know this... but there are a few grammar mistakes in there. I love the over-all idea of this poem and I hope to read more of your work soon. :)


DanielM. said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 6:01 pm
I liked your poem it was really good. Great Job

on Apr. 18 2012 at 2:11 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

preetttyy good!! :)

on Apr. 17 2012 at 1:16 pm
madlinejoy SILVER, Deale, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
let go and let God
"Love is not an emotion but a choice"



on Apr. 17 2012 at 1:16 pm
SacredAngel92 BRONZE, Oelwein, Iowa
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want to suceed be willing to do the things that others are not willing to do.

Wow!!! that was gorgeous! I loved it soooo much!!! Very good job!