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This Feeling Called Love

April 26, 2012
By alexisdm61 SILVER, Trent, South Dakota
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alexisdm61 SILVER, Trent, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can tell by the way she drinks her soda pop that she&#039;s a good dancer&quot; -- cool foriegn dude (Oscar Nu&ntilde;ez/ Ramone) in the Proposal :)<br /> <br /> &quot;In Soviet Russia drum bangs you&quot; ----MEEE :)

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This feeling called love travels throughout my blood
Poisoning everything unto its path
Every truthful lie that has every been told
Floods my body with contaminated rain
You threw me to the wolves
Thinking I wouldn’t last
Jealousy rips me to shreds
Tearing at every organ and tissue that’s left
But with every tender kiss
I grow stronger
This feeling called love glues me back together
Piece by piece, I will heal
And I will not give up this fight
Until this feeling called love
Says there’s nothing left to fight for

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2012 at 5:20 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me &quot;Life is a choice and death is a decision&quot;-Lil Wayne

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It rocked. I love the message.
alexisdm61 SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 12:59 pm
alexisdm61 SILVER, Trent, South Dakota
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can tell by the way she drinks her soda pop that she&#039;s a good dancer&quot; -- cool foriegn dude (Oscar Nu&ntilde;ez/ Ramone) in the Proposal :)<br /> <br /> &quot;In Soviet Russia drum bangs you&quot; ----MEEE :)

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WOW is a good way or a bad way??? :)
alexisdm61 SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 12:58 pm
alexisdm61 SILVER, Trent, South Dakota
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can tell by the way she drinks her soda pop that she&#039;s a good dancer&quot; -- cool foriegn dude (Oscar Nu&ntilde;ez/ Ramone) in the Proposal :)<br /> <br /> &quot;In Soviet Russia drum bangs you&quot; ----MEEE :)

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haha thanks :) :) :)
MissElbowFan BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2012 at 1:13 pm
MissElbowFan BRONZE, Dorking, Other
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first i thought this was gonna be full of cliches but now iv read it, im glad i did coz it was awesome :D
Lafar SILVER said...
on May. 21 2012 at 8:18 pm
Lafar SILVER, Paoli, Pennsylvania
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It's okay to get an F. But in the greater scheme of things, nobody cares, especially when you get an ‘F’ in something that’s not reflected in the work you want to do.

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One word: Wow.
Lizla BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2012 at 4:48 pm
Lizla BRONZE, Shelter Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everyone struggles against despair, but it always wins in the end. It has to. It&#039;s the thing that lets us say goodbye.&quot; -Jeffrey Eugenides

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love this! i like the imagery, creepy and haunting, but the good kind that sticks with you! keep writing!
MissyMay22 said...
on May. 2 2012 at 3:14 pm
MissyMay22, Long Beach, California
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I just love this :)