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May 3, 2012
By xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Accept no one&#039;s definition of your life; define yourself&quot;<br /> &quot; Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!&quot;<br /> &quot;A wise girl kisses, but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, leaves b4 shes left.&quot;


Love
Fire works
Words colliding
Heart beating
Stricken by lightning
Breathing quickens
Blood thickens.
Eyes go blurry
Free of worry
Head feels light
Heart incites
Secret language
Of romance and sanguine
It’s the beginning of a new day
Love can make beautiful changes


The author's comments:
to that special someone who is there and loves me for me and not anything else I love u forever mi amor

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on Feb. 4 2014 at 1:16 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Accept no one&#039;s definition of your life; define yourself&quot;<br /> &quot; Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!&quot;<br /> &quot;A wise girl kisses, but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, leaves b4 shes left.&quot;

thank u spo much dawnierae, sorry havent been on here forever. anything u need checked out?  

on Aug. 30 2013 at 6:03 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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really cool poem. I love all the poems that you have written, my favorite so far is Love is.. Really great job angel!! 

on Mar. 27 2013 at 8:12 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Accept no one&#039;s definition of your life; define yourself&quot;<br /> &quot; Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!&quot;<br /> &quot;A wise girl kisses, but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, leaves b4 shes left.&quot;

Thx so much :)

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2012 at 2:39 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

Awesome poem. Great job on the descriptions. I really like the end of the poem. Suggestion: expand more with more details maybe