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True Love's First Kiss

May 24, 2012
By AriannaNicole PLATINUM, Palmyra, Missouri
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A #2 pencil and a dream can take you anywhere. <br /> Joyce A. Myers

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True loves first kiss. Happily ever after. All lost in a Cinderella story, shoved into a forgotten keepsake box. No more magic. No more fairy tales. Only the polluted streets of reality. Only the harsh winds of truth.

© Emma J., Tuck, GA

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I wrote this over a year ago, but I thought I would put it up and see what you guys thought!
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AriannaNicole PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 4:07 pm
AriannaNicole PLATINUM, Palmyra, Missouri
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A #2 pencil and a dream can take you anywhere. <br /> Joyce A. Myers

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Thank you. And good idea!! :) Appreciate the help!
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2012 at 2:39 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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Mhm....i liked your title. I like your details and desricptions and imagery it was really good. The only thing i suggest is maybe add a proviking question or a hook at the end to make the readers be like WOW!!