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Deadly Bliss

May 9, 2012
By EbonyandIvory PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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EbonyandIvory PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Happiness is only a theory.<br /> Fate is my only enemy.

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It's something you'd
Just never understand
Far from anyone's
Reach or grasp
You'd never get it
It's precious
Like a gem
And locked up
In a safe
Impossible to capture
Even though it's in plain sight
It's to difficult
To explain
To retain
So allow me
To emphasize it
Suicide
The deadly bliss
A new meaning
To living twice
Freedom
Peace
Happiness
Acceptance
Just eternal bliss
Pain
But just a small sting
A quick second
Then bliss
Pure and eternal bliss
And nothing more

© Michelle M., Plainview, NY

The author's comments:
Try to tap into the mind of the person who wants to die, or in a sense, has already attempted suicide.
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Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 7:16 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

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This is kinda intense, which is what makes it so emotional and heartfelt......I liked it...
AriShine GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2012 at 8:56 am
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
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&quot;Whatever you are, be a good one.&quot; -Abraham Lincoln

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This is slightly creepy, but I love your writing style. Nice job!
HeatherOlivia GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2012 at 11:50 am
HeatherOlivia GOLD, Solothurn, Other
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&quot;All things truly wicked start from innocence.&quot; - Ernest Hemingway

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This is an interesting take on suicide. From the other point of view. You've got some talent, in an eerie way.

 

HeatherOlivia GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2012 at 11:50 am
HeatherOlivia GOLD, Solothurn, Other
16 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All things truly wicked start from innocence.&quot; - Ernest Hemingway

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This is an interesting take on suicide. From the other point of view. You've got some talent, in an eerie way.