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Sunlit

June 8, 2012
By Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 79 comments

On top
Of a hill
I stood
Alone
As the sun
Rose.
And for
Just a moment
The breaking
Dawn
Washed
Over
Me
Soaking me
In the Breath
Of a
Brand
New
Day.
And just
For a moment,
I stood,
Bathed
In orange light,
Completely exposed.
My entire
Being
Spread out,
Floating around
In my
Shadow.
I stood,
Alone and
Alive for a
Moment,
For just one
Moment,
Transluscent.
Sunlit.


The author's comments:
This was just another one of those split second inspiration moments. Boom. Type. Enjoy.

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on Jul. 27 2013 at 12:23 pm
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
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Life isn&#039;t measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.<br /> <br /> You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Wow, fantastic imagery! 

on Sep. 12 2012 at 5:15 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Theres so many that I can&#039;t pick sorry

Uhhh.....amazing! Enough said

on Sep. 8 2012 at 9:21 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 79 comments
I... don't know! :P It kinda just comes to me in flashes. Sometimes I can just spew writing (that's quite good, IMHO) and then other days, it's slow as a bog and what does come is horrible! So, I'm not really sure. But I'm glad you like it. ;)

.king. SILVER said...
on Sep. 8 2012 at 5:31 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡&deg;)

Excellent!! How do you write like that ?! I am very inspired! ^ ^ 5/5

on Jul. 16 2012 at 12:48 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 79 comments
Hey, thanks!

on Jul. 15 2012 at 1:56 pm
Swimmerguy SILVER, N/A, Iowa
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Loving someone doesnt need a reason. If you can explain why you love someone, its not called &quot;love&quot;... Its called &quot;like&quot;.

nice, very descriptive