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July 10, 2012
By loveliza1111 BRONZE, Hope, Rhode Island
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loveliza1111 BRONZE, Hope, Rhode Island
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"The world may be broken, but hope is not crazy." ~John Green

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I sit and watch the sun sink low.
You are on my mind
Pinks and oranges spread like a fire.
They spread like you.
You are everywhere.
You inhabit me.
You wrap around me
And don’t let me go.
And I can’t decide if I need you—
Or if I’m drowning.

© Barrie T., Scarsdale, NY

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carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2012 at 2:42 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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loveliza1111 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2012 at 2:10 pm
loveliza1111 BRONZE, Hope, Rhode Island
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Thank you very very much :) haha
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2012 at 1:51 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

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