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Velvet Roads

July 17, 2012
By RachelNarozniak GOLD, Allentown, New Jersey
RachelNarozniak GOLD, Allentown, New Jersey
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Here is like no other
place
the sky is made of denim
and it's a suede dirt that you take your steps upon
Fields of calico under a sun of ribbons
An evening sky with button stars
Silken butterflies floating
on the soft breeze
And no matter where you go,
velvet roads lead you
home



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on Jul. 21 2012 at 2:27 pm
iCheeto PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
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I really like this poem.  The imagery is great, and you created a whimsical world in so little words.  Nice work :)

sbarker SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2012 at 1:46 pm
sbarker SILVER, West Rutland, Vermont
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I love this one!