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Another Side of Me

August 10, 2012
By theSe7enthSin BRONZE, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
theSe7enthSin BRONZE, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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She sits in the shadows of my soul,
Waiting for her moment of control.
The poisoned apple of my eye,
Only leading me to my demise.

She burns the brightest,
Surpassing the others with her persistence.
Ebbing away at my spirit,
Infecting my thoughts with disease.

Once she is provoked,
She can not be revoked.
You can see her in my eyes,
Filling me with despise.

The others tell me to take caution,
But she taints my perception.
She is an endless spiral staircase,
Her name outlines the frown on my face.

She is anger.



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on May. 3 2013 at 9:41 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Yup!  Have you checked out the Roleplaying?  It's pretty fun! :)

on May. 2 2013 at 6:35 pm
theSe7enthSin BRONZE, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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really? Lol i dont remember that! heeeheehee still on here i see!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 2:28 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

OMG after looking at an old thread I found the post where you told me your new username but I never looked at it!  Yay! Found you!!

on Aug. 27 2012 at 8:05 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

This was really good! My favorite line had to be "Her name outlines the frown on me face" and I mean, we all have that other side of us we don't want anyone to see. This definitely reminds me of a song called The Darker Side Of Me. It was well-written too. My only complaint is in the third section, well, thats the only place you didn't rhyme and it kinda confused me. It would flow better if it was all rhyme instead of mostly rhyme and then....that.

on Aug. 16 2012 at 4:50 pm
alice.is.falling BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Why is a raven like a writing desk? ~The mad hatter

   This is so well written and beautifully put together!  My favorite line is 'the poisoned apple of my eye' its a very good spin on the original saying! :)

on Aug. 15 2012 at 10:35 pm
theSe7enthSin BRONZE, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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aww thanks, it means a lot to me that you even read it! :)

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on Aug. 15 2012 at 10:32 pm
Meonly BRONZE, Granite Falls, Minnesota
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I love it   Anger  It drains me It eats me Somedays it contols me It is every part that is not the real me"  you are talking about yourself tho, right that's where im confused 

on Aug. 15 2012 at 10:29 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Had to re-read it a few times, very well written I love it. Great job, keep it up!