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Just when.

August 23, 2012
By Brookie1996 GOLD, Long Branch, New Jersey
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Brookie1996 GOLD, Long Branch, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
''tears are the words the heart cant express"

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When your pain becomes true and your worst fears become reality , you want to give up on all and never look back. I always pick myself back up , this time i wanna stay down for a while an see what it means to be something in the future while I'm feeling like nothing now , no more pretending i never was and i don't think i ever will be ...

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Brookie1996 GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 11:11 pm
Brookie1996 GOLD, Long Branch, New Jersey
13 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;tears are the words the heart cant express&quot;

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thank you so much
TheCapturedBat GOLD said...
on Feb. 13 2013 at 8:08 pm
TheCapturedBat GOLD, Belen, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
If all else perished and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger. <br /> -- Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

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I've thought things like this. The last line felt so familiar. Beautiful poem!