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Love's Confusion

September 8, 2012
By Ashlynn149637 SILVER, Snow Hill, North Carolina
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Ashlynn149637 SILVER, Snow Hill, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Music comes to me more readily than words."
-Ludwig van Beethoven

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The blues and reds
Surround your being
Fire and ice meeting
Seems to be so freeing

The steam creates a fog
One impossible to see through
Though I am afraid
It is peaceful in this purple hue

Suddenly the fog evaporates
It is replaced by a night sky
One dotted with many stars
Like millions of watching eyes

Paranoia strikes
My heart starts to race
I take a single step forward
And the stars vanish into space

My feet start to run
Until the ground is gone
I hit the floor with a smack
And see your eyes once more

The reds and blues are back
The purple clouds make me sane
As fire and ice starts to sizzle
And makes beautiful music once again

© Lauren N., Denton, TX

The author's comments:
While texting this guy today I thought of how if we would date, what would happen. We have dated before and it didn't end too beautifully. To me he can convince you his one thing or another (Fire and ice), but I see him as who he is (the peaceful purple haze). The night sky represents us together and how I think it's beautiful, until the people around us (the stars) start to interfere. I am so afraid of how his family and my family will react to our relationship since this is the South and we are two different races. Also, of how his sisters hate me and my sister and friends do not like him. (Yes I know it kind of sounds like a Romeo and Juliet situation). My running is me fleeing from the situation, but as always he says something that makes me become grounded. In the end, I know that I shouldn't care what others think, if this is what we want, then no one else should have an input on it.
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Ashlynn149637 SILVER said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 10:30 pm
Ashlynn149637 SILVER, Snow Hill, North Carolina
9 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music comes to me more readily than words."
-Ludwig van Beethoven

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Thank you :)
SoulPoetry PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 28 2013 at 11:01 pm
SoulPoetry PLATINUM, Sierra Madre, California
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I see a Frost reference :D it's a beautiful poem btw:)
Ashlynn149637 SILVER said...
on Sep. 29 2012 at 10:15 pm
Ashlynn149637 SILVER, Snow Hill, North Carolina
9 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music comes to me more readily than words."
-Ludwig van Beethoven

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Thanks a bunch!  
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2012 at 9:59 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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I really liked the contrast.
Ashlynn149637 SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2012 at 10:52 pm
Ashlynn149637 SILVER, Snow Hill, North Carolina
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"Music comes to me more readily than words."
-Ludwig van Beethoven

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Thanks a bunch! I'm really happy I put the explanation up there now :) After I started looking at other's poems and I saw that they didn't have explanations and I was freaking out! Anyways, I'm going to try my best to write some more poems in the next week ^_^ I'd love for you to read them and the rest of my stuff!
OWLSLOVESIX GOLD said...
on Sep. 27 2012 at 10:17 pm
OWLSLOVESIX GOLD, Union, Connecticut
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This is really good! I didn't really get it till I read what you wrote to go with it. This is such a butiful poem! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Owls
Ashlynn149637 SILVER said...
on Sep. 23 2012 at 1:17 pm
Ashlynn149637 SILVER, Snow Hill, North Carolina
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"Music comes to me more readily than words."
-Ludwig van Beethoven

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Thanks! ^_^
HummingbirdHeart BRONZE said...
on Sep. 23 2012 at 1:10 pm
HummingbirdHeart BRONZE, Strafford, Missouri
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I love this poem. You did a great job! :D
Ashlynn149637 SILVER said...
on Sep. 22 2012 at 12:46 pm
Ashlynn149637 SILVER, Snow Hill, North Carolina
9 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music comes to me more readily than words."
-Ludwig van Beethoven

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Thanks a bunch! :)
Jazzluv411 SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 6:35 pm
Jazzluv411 SILVER, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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"There's a point in your life when you realize, who matters, who always did, who never did, and who wont anymore so dont worry about the people in your past there's a reason they didn't make it in your future"

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I love this, i liked how you used different things to represent you and him and everything around you:)