Fight | Teen Ink


September 10, 2012
By LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

Forever I'll fight
Fight for my rights
For what I believe
For what is mine

Forever I'll fight
Fight for my love
Fight for us
Fight for what is ours

Forever I'll fight
fight for happiness
Fight for freedom
For what I deserve

Forever I'll fight
For the hell of the fight
For the fight that is yours
For the fight that is mine

The author's comments:
Never be afraid to fight for whats right.

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bagley777 GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2012 at 9:17 pm
bagley777 GOLD, Tucson, Arizona
11 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a two way street. If you find yourself on a one-way road, it's time to take the next turn off.

Love the poem and the idea. Always stand up for what you believe in! Another awesome poem(:

on Sep. 13 2012 at 5:28 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
52 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

I like this one better than the other. The repetition is good. But like the other, I think it could be flushed out more. You should really write longer poems.