What Would You Do For Me? | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. What Would You Do For Me?

What Would You Do For Me?

October 16, 2012
By so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
More by this author
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

View profile

“What would you do for me?”
“I would

Walk through fire,

Touch a blade,

Drink poison,

Die a slave.
What would you do for me?”
“I would

Kiss you first,

Make it last,

Back away slowly,

And then run away fast.”
“If my

Last wish was for

One last kiss,

But stay with me forever,

Would you mutter ‘never’?”
“I would

Scream it to the world,

Make ‘never’ known,

Tear away from you,

And die my own.”

© Bryttany O., Shenandoah, PA

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
When this poem felt eternal...
By KICK3593 PLATINUM
Roslyn Heights, New York
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
49 articles 0 photos 74 comments
View profile
Poetry
Secret Crush
By C.J.H. BRONZE
Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
C.J.H. BRONZE, Benciao City, Taipei County, Other
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes the world tries ot knock it out of you. But I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales." August Rush(2007)

View profile
Poetry
Maybe I&#39ll let my Heart be Happy
By MariaMarie DIAMOND
Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

View profile
Poetry
Shiver
By AnnieC SILVER
Council, Idaho
AnnieC SILVER, Council, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I can gather all the news I need on the weather report. Hey, I&#039;ve got nothing to do today but smile.&quot; Simon and Garfunkel &#039;The Only Living Boy in New York&#039;

View profile
Poetry
Fear
By wordweaver96 PLATINUM
Winchester, Kentucky
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. &quot;<br /> Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> <br /> See, we really DON&#039;T have anything to fear but fear itself!

View profile
Poetry
Waiting
By wordweaver96 PLATINUM
Winchester, Kentucky
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. &quot;<br /> Albus Dumbledore<br /> <br /> <br /> See, we really DON&#039;T have anything to fear but fear itself!

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 27 comments.

so_joy SILVER said...
on Nov. 18 2012 at 7:29 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

View profile
Thank you so much!!!
Gee-Gee SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2012 at 2:53 pm
Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you dont like me get over it

View profile
this was really good i think you have a future in writting if you really really want it. keep writting ill be looking foward to reading more :) and thank you for commenting on mine as well it means alot
OldYoungOne said...
on Nov. 16 2012 at 2:36 pm
It sounded liek a song when I read this, nice job :) The use of  dialogue was a clever idea and i could see a couple talking on a phone saying these words.
so_joy SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2012 at 8:59 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

View profile
Thank you so much!! Would you mind checking out my poems Sitting Alone and Fishbowl? I would love to hear your opinion in them.
JoyfulCheers SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2012 at 8:28 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back

View profile
I love the way you written your poem. You dont see much dialoge or questions in a poem but I loved how you used yours. Great set of tone and usage of words. Your a wonderful writer, keep up the work :D
so_joy SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 6:38 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

View profile
Thank you! Mind checking out my poem, Sitting Alone? It would mean a lot.
remember16 SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2012 at 6:27 am
remember16 SILVER, WhiteLake, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is only a minor setback to a major comeback

View profile
i like the way you added dialougue in it, its very good i can relate to this poem too.