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November 3, 2012
By thenaturalmystic PLATINUM, Tomah, Wisconsin
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&quot;thunder only happens when its raining players only love you when they&#039;re playing&quot;<br /> (STEVIE NICKS)

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Why must you?
Kick me down?
Just when I’m getting up, you kick me so hard,
My gut clenches, my stomach lurches’ my heart stops…
I can’t take it; I can’t stop it either…
Kick and kick and kick me down that’s all you do because you don’t care.
It’s not fair.
I hate you for this one thing, just this one thing and that’s all…
So
Why must you kick me down, just when I start to get the hang of things, just when I start to care again…
Thank you,


So much.

~Owen~

© Abbey O., Marblehead, MA

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