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Emotions of a Tear Drop

November 4, 2012
By LabitGurl GOLD, Carrboro, North Carolina
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LabitGurl GOLD, Carrboro, North Carolina
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"Before yoy criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them you are a mile away from them, and you have their shoes."

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I hate you more than
The video games you play when I'm over
And more than the fridays you don't spend with me
I love you more than
When we watch scary movies together and I get to hug you tight
And more than the clearest nights we spend under the stars
I want you more than
All the toys you won me at the fair
And more than all the valentines day gifts you have given me
I need you more than
Than the old photos I have of us
And more than the moment when I first saw you
I wish you were back here with me
More than you could ever know

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

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bulby545 SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2012 at 6:43 pm
bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
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when life gives you lemons you make apple juice

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its  a nice poem can you do me the honor of rating and commenting on a poem or my short story thing i have please
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 27 2012 at 1:42 pm
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
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cool. i love it.