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Am i right?

December 18, 2012
By Anonymous

I think about u all the time,
I think I need some help to make up my mind
My brain is going crazy
While my heart is pumping daily
Searching and Searching
Making sure I’m doing what’s right’;
Scared to hurt you;
Scared to make you cry;
So I’m still searching
Searching for what’s right
Does love do this to everyone else?
Is it like a homerun?
Or some kind of battle gun?
I love you
I swear I do
But I’m just not sure
Is it the right choice for U!!

© Anonymous

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This article makes me thing of every single love situation i have had to handle!! What about you?
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This article has 13 comments.

farah9723 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 9:15 am
farah9723 BRONZE, Beirut, Other
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Thanks! :)
farah9723 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 9:14 am
farah9723 BRONZE, Beirut, Other
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Thanks hun!:)
farah9723 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 9:13 am
farah9723 BRONZE, Beirut, Other
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Thanks :) !!
farah9723 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 9:12 am
farah9723 BRONZE, Beirut, Other
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i hope it works out :) thanks hun! :)
farah9723 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 9:12 am
farah9723 BRONZE, Beirut, Other
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yepp . We have all been there :/
farah9723 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 9:05 am
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hahahaha no , ur right but it usually depends on a persons experience....but u do have a point ; in order to attract more ,u write about something no ones written about , i get it :) thankss :)
Opticalillusion DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 9:02 am
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honnestly im gonna say what i tell everyone who writes a love poem or story "its deep and it tells me what you gone through, so good job" but rlly again u may not have noticed.. but love storys,poems and such are a very common thing rlly to common so i would say you should write about somthing less people write about so u stand out dfrom the crowd. thats my honnest crtiqe im just trying to help :) so dont get mad  i tell this to everyone who writes a love poem,story or article and wants me to read and comment. :D
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 28 2012 at 8:50 am
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I haven't really had a love life, but I could feel what you would have felt while writing it. Keep it up!
. said...
on Dec. 24 2012 at 3:22 pm
This was really good. It describes my love life..
Shesavy SILVER said...
on Dec. 24 2012 at 1:50 pm
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my guy friend and I are going through this situation and this describes it compltetely. This is a very well written piece
loveshersheys said...
on Dec. 24 2012 at 12:32 pm
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I love this poem. It's really touching =)
necci SILVER said...
on Dec. 24 2012 at 12:32 pm
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wow very good well written
dend90 SILVER said...
on Dec. 24 2012 at 12:21 pm
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Absolutely wonderful.  It really shows exactly how a person's mind would be thinking