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She's Gone MAG
December 10, 2012
Pulling my sleeve to drag me to
deepest desires
Brought me to the train tracks
Our hair flew
The train was close
When it passed, jumped the gate
And ran to a small shallow puddle
Scraped aside the mud
And revealed to me
Deepest desires.
A knotted worn shopping bag
Pulled apart by broken square nails.
Follow your dreams, I thought
As two coal eyes burned bright
And she did
And she's gone.
© Olivia E., Alto, MI
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This article has 5 comments.
Lokelani said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 6:58 pm
I really like this poem. I especially love the ending. Keep it up, please!!!
NarutosimG GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:36 pm
I really like your poem it really good it remind me of a friend once more a boy friend thou heee. Anyway keep make more poem thou
jeane said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:27 pm
I felt a deep heart warming emotion with a touch of sadness. When reading your poem it remind of a friend as well more of a boyfriend in a way really hee. I really like it thou keep making more
on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:23 pm
nice hun very good i loved it and it was really short wich makes me love it anymore haha lol
Skornik67 said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 6:58 pm
Reminded me of my own memories nice work could use some more description I think
