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Falling Apart

December 22, 2012
By MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
33 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray


Everyday,
I lose more sense,
Of who I am.
I search frantically,
But I am slipping.
The harder I try,
The more difficult it becomes.
I cannot sit back,
And do nothing,
I am falling apart.



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MissLizzieGirl GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:30 pm
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There is only one god, and his name is death. What do we say to death but 'Not today' "
-Syrio Forel, A Game of Thrones

simple, short, and sweet. i like it :)

on Dec. 30 2012 at 6:56 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

Of course!

on Dec. 30 2012 at 10:15 am
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
33 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray

Could you look at my poems Oxygen and Books? I want to know what you think, they got Editor's Choice, and I have only been on this site for a week, so I'm excited!

on Dec. 29 2012 at 10:59 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 342 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

Sure thing!

on Dec. 29 2012 at 4:22 pm
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
33 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray

Thanks, I appreciate you commenting on so many of my poems.

on Dec. 29 2012 at 2:54 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 342 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

That was very interesting. I like how you explain the steps that you took, and then you end very strongly.