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December 26, 2012
By helloimustbegoing PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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helloimustbegoing PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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that which doesn't kill me only makes me stronger

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Delilah has a
way with men her baby doll charms
and sparkling eyes

© Rebecca B., Santa Clara, CA

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ladybugsrock SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:47 pm
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
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"Do not go where the path may lead; go instead where there is no path and leave a trail."
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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o no now I see! I thought it was free verse and then I was confused, haha:) im soo sorry! No i totally get what you were doing!:)
helloimustbegoing PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 30 2012 at 11:34 am
helloimustbegoing PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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thanks:3 and origionally  it was a haiku,which has 5 syllables then seven  then five,but it must have gotten jumbled up when i submitted it  
ladybugsrock SILVER said...
on Dec. 30 2012 at 11:24 am
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
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I like your poem, I'm just slightly confused. Her baby doll charms, shouldn't that be on another line? Sorry if I have this all wrong... Other than that I like it!:) please check out some of my poems and stories as well!=)