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Legacy MAG

February 12, 2013
By chris341 GOLD, Springville, Utah
chris341 GOLD, Springville, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the sky, do not despair, that is where they should be. Now build the foundations under them." -Thoreau


My aunt calls my grandpa
Atticus Finch.
The greatest respect
she could hope to pay him.
Just like the rapist
who painted a fence.
The defenseless, defended
for a fresh coat of paint
Built his
Legacy.

My mom calls my grandma
if time permits.
Grandma told Mom
She didn't need college.
Mom left home without
Grandma or her money.
A lost daughter who slowly
crept back to her arms
Built her
Legacy.

My family calls upon me
to build my own future.
But I cannot build it.
I have no tools,
no hammer and nails.
I gave them to everyone
living around me.
So that they could
Build my
Legacy.



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on Aug. 19 2013 at 7:39 pm
AnnyssaHowerton GOLD, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
If there is a star in the night sky, then today was a good day.<br /> or<br /> If there is a star in the sky, then it is nighttime.

That was very well written. :) 

chris341 GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2013 at 11:48 am
chris341 GOLD, Springville, Utah
15 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the sky, do not despair, that is where they should be. Now build the foundations under them.&quot; -Thoreau

Thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you like it. To clarify, I think you are right about individuals having a great power to build their own futures. But I think ultimately, the way we treat other people will define how they remember us, which is our legacy. That was what I was trying to convey. 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 2:40 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

I love the ending but at the same time I feel in between about it. Yes, the people that are around shape our futures. They have a big part in it. But, simultaneously, we, the individual, have a biggerpart in shaping our own futures. Regardless, this is merely my opinion. By this, I'm not saying your poem isn't good. It is good. Beyond that. I love the allusion to Atticus Finch. One of my favorite literary figures ever.  Congrats on the Editors' Choice. You deserve it.