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What Have You Done to Me

March 8, 2013
By Britt_123 BRONZE, Paxton, Illinois
Britt_123 BRONZE, Paxton, Illinois
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A black cloud of pain as memories vanish,
once we were together in paradise,
hand in hand and wide-eyed,
but your heart died.

A sickening cloud of lies-
thoughts follow hate, follow love,
love taken away.
in a burst of tears,
I still love you.



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on Mar. 14 2013 at 10:59 am
Britt_123 BRONZE, Paxton, Illinois
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Thank you so much!

on Mar. 13 2013 at 11:46 am
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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This is a short poem but the emotions are true. This is a true thing that happens to a lot of people and you got it right. I'm glad you wrote this. All your lines were very poetic.

on Mar. 12 2013 at 2:38 am
digyBritt SILVER, Rochester, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"be in love with your life. Enjoy every minute of it." -Jack Keronae

This is beautiful. I especially love the last three lines.

on Mar. 11 2013 at 6:21 pm
MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
“We dream in our waking moments, and walk in our sleep.” -scarlett letter

Perfection

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on Mar. 11 2013 at 1:37 pm
KayKay6 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry comes from the heart, it is not something that is just made up"

This is a really good poem! I know exactly what you are going through, since the same situation is happening to me right now. 

on Mar. 11 2013 at 11:45 am
KassandraMichelle263451 SILVER, Charlott, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”
― Dr. Seuss

I love it I know how you feel and I wish that guy still loved me.

on Mar. 11 2013 at 11:07 am
Britt_123 BRONZE, Paxton, Illinois
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thank you!

on Mar. 11 2013 at 8:55 am
ash57999 SILVER, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"A room without books is like a body without a soul" -Marcus Tullius Cicero

This poem is short, but it really slaps you in the face with the emotion portrayed.  I really love this poem.  Great job!