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Darkness MAG

August 20, 2008
By VandaNoon PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
VandaNoon PLATINUM, West Pittston, Pennsylvania
42 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
what i can remember
is a lot like water
trickling down a page
of the most beautiful colors
-Marie Digby 'Unfold'

For wit is not wit,
Be it unspoken

And humor shall it only once be shown,
Is just a hiccup of the soul

Bravery, shall you cower in the corner?
Is it a mere consideration of your heart?

Loving kindness shall it be exhibited but once,
Is not a quality of thee

We have the qualities of the divine within us,
And we can have them all the time

But should we choose to end them,
Then the evil will entwine,
And darkness shall shine

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on Jun. 13 2011 at 9:06 pm
Rachybaby BRONZE, Lake In The Hills, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"You have to take the good with the bad, smile when you're sad, love what you've got and remember what you had... Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret, people change, things go wrong, just remember, life goes on."

Clever! I love the rhythem of your poem. :)


on Jun. 13 2011 at 5:26 pm
NatChick SILVER, Muskegon, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Not everything that is faced can be changed. But nothing can be changed until it's faced."-James Baldwin


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on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:19 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:

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on Jun. 13 2011 at 3:17 am
NehaThakur BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
'A word is dead when it is said some say,
I say it just begins to live that day'

 Liked it! keep it up!

on Mar. 8 2010 at 8:53 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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wow! that was really good!!! i liked it. keep writing!

Nechama SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 7:54 pm
Nechama SILVER, Longmont, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are born alone, we live alone, we die alone. Only through out love and friendship can we create the illusion that for the moment we're not alone." Orson Welles

It was really good and very deep. Keep writing.

Lonleydandy said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:41 pm
I like it. It was really good. The questions really add to the poem itself. Amazing

on Jun. 9 2009 at 6:36 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow! This is amazing. I enjoyed it. I loved how you used rhetorical questions in this piece. It really capture my attention and I'm sure it will of others. Keep up the good work!!

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