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Behind These Walls

March 24, 2013
By gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
15 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ~ Moulin Rouge


The person that
You think you see
Is not the one
Who really is me

If you could see
What happens inside
You would then know
The reason I hide

For that side of me
I've worked hard to change
But it will always be part of me
I can never exchange

This side of me
I dare not show
For I fear if I do
Then off you will go

Far far away
From the person you knew
Away from me somewhere
Leaving me blue

Behind these wall
Is a monster, you see,
So I hope that you never
See that side of me


The author's comments:
I was looking through the writings on my laptop and i found this. I somewhat remember writing it, but I don't remember when or why. It's kind of a weird feeling. Oh well. Let me know what you guys think of it.

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on Dec. 9 2013 at 6:17 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

I really like this and the subject. I have read most of your poems and my main thing is rhyming. In every single one of your poems you rhyme. It cripples you because it limits your choice of words. I would suggest, if you want to become a better writer, start writing poetry that doesn't rhyme, or has internal rhyme. 

on May. 2 2013 at 4:53 pm
Lovely346 BRONZE, TUCSON, Arizona
2 articles 30 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love overcomes the Love of power, the world will know peace"

I love it, I can really relate to this feeling. Good Job! (: