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Agony

April 5, 2013
By laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
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Lost in the gargantuan world of love,
his soft angelic glow guides her
through the darkness.
Loneliness gnaws deep into her soul,
and the torture endures.

Frantically searching for an escape
from this agony.
Hopeless search,
useless search.
Her weary mind exhausts eventually,
but never really gives up.
It always looks for light.
She is lost, and needs help
finding him.

Help her!
Before her empty aching heart dies
from the pain it suffers through.
She needs him.
The dilemma poses itself,
and the pain hurts acutely.
Stinging needles in her heart,
eternal rain from her eyes.
Don’t ignore her desperate pleas!

A weeping soul that knows no rest,
no escape,
no end.
Tired of the search but nevertheless continuing.
A hungry, ravaged heart
wanting but a small taste of love
but never obtaining one.
Let her weeping soul rest.
Put an end to her eternal rain.
Don’t make her desperate search in vain!

Her mind deteriorates,
gradually dissolving into the nothingness.
The suffering knows no end.
It is immortal.
a soul,
a mind,
a body.
Forever bound to love’s magnetism.

It’s pull overwhelms,
its weight crushes,
its gravity forever alive.
Don’t let her die
without love.
Lacerations on her soul,
seeping pain.
lingering pain.
then death.

A life lived without love,
not even a life.


The author's comments:
I woke up one night and this just came to me. It expresses my feelings at the time about my current experience with love and the lack thereof.

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on Sep. 20 2013 at 8:51 pm
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
113 articles 0 photos 21 comments
Thanks so much!(:

on Sep. 20 2013 at 8:49 pm
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
113 articles 0 photos 21 comments
Thanks so much!(:

on Jun. 10 2013 at 10:08 am
Midnight_Starsong GOLD, Wesson, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
She never once gave up. My mom is my hero.

Really nice work. Keep it up!

on Jun. 8 2013 at 9:18 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

this almost made me cry its very deep but also amazing.