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I love this! I thought that the set-up was very unique and easy to follow. I like the title because it sets up suspense for the reader, you don't know what route the poem is going to go, you get an idea, but not the whole concept. I loved the fourth line, it was sad but made me feel calm. I like how you put that you wished a better path would be shown, that's life isn't it? It's foggy and you wish it were more clear. That moment of dissapoinment in yourself when you say you've accepted defeat, I felt the emotion really well. I love the ending.. so mysterious! GREAT job!