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Fallen Angel

April 13, 2013
By ChristinaC. PLATINUM, Corry, Pennsylvania
ChristinaC. PLATINUM, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Quoth the Raven, 'Nevermore.'"


The Pearly Gates
Are so far away
I can no longer reach
Paradises entry way.
I didn’t fight in God’s war
I had something else to do
Instead of fighting by my brothers
I was fighting for you.
Such a perfect little creature
A light in all the grey
Never had I paid attention to anyone
Until that very special day.
When we talked, my palms would sweat
When you laughed, my heart fluttered like a dove
And I realized, to my surprise
For you, I was falling in love.

I thought I’d forever be
In my Fathers grace
But I gave up everything
And was forced to leave His place.
My wings were clipped
And a human’s life I was sent to live
But if given the chance again
I would again give all I could give.
Scars cover my body
Where wings and runes used to be
Of Power, Strength, Agility, and more
A story of what was once the old me.
I’ve moved on from my past
Of when I lived on a cloud
Because you shot me down, now a fallen angel
A miracle God has allowed.



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on Apr. 17 2013 at 5:28 pm
ChristinaC. PLATINUM, Corry, Pennsylvania
21 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Quoth the Raven, 'Nevermore.'"

YES! I absolutely love that series.  When I started writing this poem, that part of the books popped into my head and I had to put it in.

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on Apr. 16 2013 at 1:58 pm
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken&quot;<br /> -Taylor Swift

This was amazing, and so relating. Keep writing! and if you could, do you mind taking a look at my poem "Love is.." and commenting on it please??

on Apr. 16 2013 at 6:42 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness&quot;

I have to agree it brings to life what we all think about giving it all away for that one, and then the flow of it all sent chills down my back as i had to keep reading it over and over and over :3 so keep it up your an amazing writer

on Apr. 16 2013 at 12:22 am
OnlyOfSilver BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We live and breath words&quot; --Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Prince

A lovely (if not somewhat dark) story and many well executed rhymes, my favorite being dove and love. Were you by any chance alluding to the Shadowhunter Chronicals by Cassandra Clare when you mentioned "...runes used to be/Of Power, Strength, Agility, and more"? If not, then sorry for misunderstanding and the lines sound fabulous regardless.