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April 26, 2013
By Anonymous

my friend is a girl
she is insecure
she has me at the ready
crying in her room
i make her feel better
when she cries i give her comfort
the crimson drops are from my help
soon there will be nothing left

© Anonymous

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VitamAeternam PLATINUM said...
on May. 7 2013 at 1:50 pm
VitamAeternam PLATINUM, Fenton, Michigan
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Dark, sad, and true.... well written
davidnolan BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2013 at 12:55 pm
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It's very dark, but the emotion in it is great! good job!
readaholic PLATINUM said...
on May. 6 2013 at 1:53 pm
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Cool poem, really like it :)
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on May. 3 2013 at 9:53 am
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I love the ending for this
Tabitha1233 PLATINUM said...
on May. 1 2013 at 12:23 pm
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The darkness of the poem really shines, it's truly lovely! Great job!
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Creeeeepy O_O yet good
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
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it is a little dark, but i luv it it makes me feel much better -Sunny-