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The God

April 29, 2013
By jmitchbb SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
jmitchbb SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Shattered by the presence
Of the god like creature that stood above her
She bowed her eyes
Staring at the cracked face of the pavement
Once happily talking with her freinds
She is silent

The god booms
And she tries to speak
But the wrinkly guy on the ground tells her no

She wants to kick
But the asphalt face tells her no

She waits for the god to leave
And when it does
It takes a bit of her voice
And her fight
With it

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on May. 20 2013 at 8:42 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. " FFDP "You're born alone and you die alone" FFDP "I wonder out where you can't see, inside my shell I wait and bleed." Slipknot " If youre 555 then I am 666"

This poem with defiantly created with strong emotion behind it! I also love the repairing of the god, it really emphasizes what you want the reader to understand. Awesome!

on May. 14 2013 at 3:48 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
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Awesome, I loved it! :) It's very deep and full of meaning. You are very talented.Write on :D

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on May. 13 2013 at 6:20 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Awesome!! Very well written; Im sooo curious to know what ur inpiration was for this! Ur an excellent writer ! :)

on May. 10 2013 at 8:39 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Didn't really understand this, but that's my fault. I can tell it was really thought cool XD

on May. 4 2013 at 4:45 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Interesting, in a good way!!! I liked the imagery and the picture wasf frperfect!!! Keep rockin