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April 29, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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He built it himself.
A wooden quilt patched with nails.
It kept out the wind.

He liked what he saw.
And on the door he painted
In bright red “Stay Out.”

It was near a lake.
He could hear water nearby.
But he never swam.

In the summertime,
The house was sticky with heat,
And sap ran wet and hot.

© Lindsay S., Billings, MT

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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on May. 5 2013 at 8:07 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
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Thanks :) :) :)
TargonTheDragon GOLD said...
on May. 5 2013 at 4:10 pm
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
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I really like this one :D kinda abstract, sorta mysterious. good job!