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Tears

May 3, 2013
By MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray


Hot tears fall,
Disappearing into my pillow,
A storm of them,
Among a sea of salty tears.

As I cry,
All the pain fades away,
And taking its place,
Is nothingness.

No happiness,
No pain,
No anger,
I am numb.

I have to go now,
I must collect more tears,
So that someday,
I may cry again.



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on Aug. 2 2014 at 7:11 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
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this sounds soo good dude. i like it a lot...ignore the two haters!..keep writing you are awesome!

on Feb. 17 2014 at 9:07 pm
lordfarquad BRONZE, Arlen, Texas
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on Jan. 12 2014 at 10:29 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

This was good, my main thing is that in the first stanza you say "Amoung a sea of salty tears." You were already talking about tears so I would change the word "amoung" to something like "collecting" or "forming". Other than that this was very raw and emotional.