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Clarity

May 30, 2013
By laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
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I look up at the sky and spot a streak of misplaced optimism
blended into the sea of darkness.
The luminous streak of sunlight doesn’t seem to fit in amidst
the gloomy horizon of a backdrop.
It’s peculiar,
and I wonder
how it got there in the first place.
But then I realize that it’s been there all along.
I realize that I’ve been ignoring it this whole time.
I look up again, but this time, I allow the ray of bright hope to adorn
the dark sorrow of the sky.
And then I laugh at my inability to notice
the subtle specks of light that have always resided
among the shadowy crevices between the gray clouds of despair.



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on Jun. 6 2013 at 10:20 pm
laxgirl06 ELITE, Cheshire, Connecticut
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Thank you so much!! You are actually the first one to comment on my poetry. I appreciate it, although I believe I have much room for improvement. Perhaps in the future we can provide each other feedback/constructive criticism? Just a suggestion. Thanks.

on Jun. 6 2013 at 5:14 am
WrenArrington, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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I like your word choice; it really spices up the poem and makes it more interesting to read. I have no real criticism for you, and that's rare with me, so congratulations :P