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my dream

June 21, 2013
By vishakha BRONZE, Delhi, Other
vishakha BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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Waves beating on the sand,
there we sit hand in hand.
basking in the bright sun
enjoying the company and having fun
together making castles of sand
as if all is done with a magical wand
the sun begins to set
it seems like we have just met
but we have known each other for a while
now even a thought of you makes me smile
we begin to walk
and start to talk
that we are perfect for each other
and for the rest we may not bother
our steps and heart were in such a sync
that you can't even think
he stops and looks at me
i look up and he is all i see
a bit lower than he lean
and it's like a perfect scene
i always wake up feeling like a happy bream
and i realize it was just a dream
then i am left lorn
crying like a baby newly born...


The author's comments:
i m a girl of 14...hope you like my poetry. have a written many i'll upload them too but pls do comment..its a great inspiration:)

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on Aug. 18 2013 at 1:19 am
vishakha BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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thank you so much tanvi..!!! 

on Aug. 17 2013 at 12:04 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

awesome work!!

on Aug. 14 2013 at 11:59 pm
vishakha BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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thanks:)) ur comment is really appreaciated!!

on Jul. 6 2013 at 3:42 am
zeesmusic BRONZE, Calcutta, Other
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i believe in pink i believe that laughing is the best calorie burner i believe in kissing , kissing a lot .i believe in being being strong when evrything seems to be going wrong i believe that happy girls are prettiest girls i believe in miracles ...

Sweet... Good work.. :)

on Jun. 25 2013 at 9:17 am
vishakha BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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thank you so much:)

on Jun. 25 2013 at 1:24 am
dwitch31 BRONZE, Mumbai, Other
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the future belongs to those people who believe in the beauty of their dreams

nice and simple!!! good work,visakha.....