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Love Me, Love Me Not

August 1, 2013
By CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
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"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was." - Unknown

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Burning,
In the back of my mind,
Forever,
Tattooed on my heart,
Engraved,
In my skin,
Your love,
Leaving me breathless,
Amazed,
By your perfection,
Confused,
By your kindness,
Blinded,
By the light you shine into my life,
Frozen,
With the fear of losing you forever,
Distracted,
By the happiness,
The love,
Or what I thought was love,
Haunted,
By the unforgettable memories,
Forever,
You will be in my heart,
Love me,
Love me not,
But I will always love you.

© Alex B., Bethesda, MD

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CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 7 2013 at 12:51 pm
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it&#039;s yours, if it doesn&#039;t, it never was.&quot; - Unknown

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Thanks! :) That's good to hear, because I was going for intense :P 
MissExploration BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2013 at 8:38 pm
MissExploration BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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Great poem! In every other line you used one word and added more to it. It made it feel intense.
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2013 at 8:30 am
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it&#039;s yours, if it doesn&#039;t, it never was.&quot; - Unknown

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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback :)
Ingolden BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2013 at 2:27 pm
Ingolden BRONZE, Vilnius, Other
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deep fellings 
great work! :)