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Secret

August 21, 2013
By Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
11 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)


The rigid reality of the silent
truth inside her head
is that it seeps effortlessly
beneath the mind
Flourishing only in the ravishing
darkness of lust
Destined to hide from the opponent most deserving of it's
knowledge



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RheaB. BRONZE said...
on Oct. 6 2013 at 11:58 pm
RheaB. BRONZE, Seymour, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where the road takes you is your decision.

I like this poem. It's edgy, carves a fine line of dangerous and meaningful.

dancer25 GOLD said...
on Aug. 22 2013 at 2:48 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

You are very welcome

on Aug. 21 2013 at 7:00 pm
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
11 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)

oh my gosh thanks so much!

dancer25 GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2013 at 5:12 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

This is amazing. i am lost for words. It, to my interpretation, decribes a girl whom has a secret that she refuses to reveal to even a most trusted individual. But that is just how i saw the meaning of the words