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The Starting Point

August 27, 2013
By Distant_Freedom DIAMOND, Nowhere, Pennsylvania
Distant_Freedom DIAMOND, Nowhere, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean


In my little red bed, she came for wet summers with my mom.
Cowy ends the night lake, getting it hot together far up inside magic flowers.
Girlfriend jumps Boy Cocoon to see his pig.
I flew no joy that Child Twirly Frog for squirrel Snowa eat like Dog Sister and cry for they imagine Cloud.
I get silent for there goes the happy banana.
Fast red flowers at night put babies fed into slow round cocoons of love.


The author's comments:
This is a load of nonsense that my friends and I created a long time ago.

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on Sep. 14 2013 at 11:54 am
Distant_Freedom DIAMOND, Nowhere, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. -James Dean

I suppose it is. We wrote it in a way that wouldn't make any sense at all, so there isn't any meaning behind the words.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 6:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I agree. It's nonsensical. But isn't most poetry that way? This is an enjoyable read...despite the inability to decipher it.