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Guilt

August 28, 2013
By CrazySissi GOLD, Newman Lake, Washington
CrazySissi GOLD, Newman Lake, Washington
19 articles 10 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
My only love sprung from my only hate. Too early seen unknown and known too late.


It's a pit in the bottom of your stomach
It eats you up and it spits you out
It catches you in the worst of times
Some move on but some hold it forever
It is the guilt that ensnares us all



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on Sep. 16 2013 at 10:28 am
MissExploration BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
It Can Only Fly When It Needs To.

I like this poem, however This poem to me personally, the ending doesn't really feel like an ending. 

on Sep. 2 2013 at 1:52 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

I like it cuz its true but its too literal u shuld is w a little more show not tell and more metaphors :) keep rockin!!