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Things I like about him

October 7, 2013
By Isabella_Bracero BRONZE, New Brighton, Minnesota
Isabella_Bracero BRONZE, New Brighton, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"If you dont smile, you wont know who's falling for your smile." -Isabella Bracero


When I see him, his eyes; it just makes me joyful.
Whenever I am sad, he will always find a
Way to cheer me up.
His smile is so perfect that you have to see it to believe it.
Just that
One touch makes me have chills up and down my spine.
He makes me feel special when he talks
To me because he just looks at you and no-one else.
The only sad part is that when he
has to leave, my heart grieves when we have to part. He says goodbye and gives me a hug and it just feels amazing.
His
Warm body is like the sun beaming on your body.
It just feels right. When he asked me
For my phone number, I gave it to him and said to me that he will text me soon so we
Could hangout together.
I just feel so happy.
When he talks to me, his voice is just so
Calm and I feel calm to like the waves of the sea.
When he laughs, it just sounds like he
Really means it and not just being sarcastic about it.
When I see him he always asks first,
“How are you doing?”
He is so polite and he is generous.
His personality is great.
I have
Liked him since I was four years old.
We have so many memories of us together and what
We did.
He remembers coming over to my house and he remembers me coming over to
His.
We still talk to each other a lot and we want to hang out together very soon.
He says
That he’s so excited to see me and I’m very excited to see him.
I hope that we can become
More than friends and I hope he thinks the same.



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on Oct. 8 2013 at 8:34 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I like the story line in this poem and the history you give to make the readers understand it more:)

LindsayB GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2013 at 6:23 pm
LindsayB GOLD, Aston, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't need to be brave every minute of everyday, just a few seconds at a time."

Absolutely adorable. I love the way you portrayed the guy, he sounds perfect. I hope you become more than friends, too.

dom5300 said...
on Oct. 8 2013 at 2:13 pm
dom5300, Everett, Washington
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this poem is amazing i cant believe it