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October 7, 2013
By Orchid.cereal GOLD, Bend, Oregon
Orchid.cereal GOLD, Bend, Oregon
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remember when we met?

remember that bracelet?

sometimes love hurts hurts,

and all you do is look down at ur shirt,

you pretend that it doesn't bother you,

and you know these words are true,

stop pretending your not dying inside,

cause i know all you want to do is turn away and hide,

i know what you want to tell me,

but you're too busy playing with that stupid bracelet,

the one with all the gems,

you got it for your 13th birthday,but you still can't remember when,

when everything was rainbows and butterflies,

and everyday there were bright blue skies,

and i would run in the tall grass,

and then we would both walk back quietly to class,

and everyday we would smile,

and sometimes sneak out a while,

and sometimes it comes back to me,

all these sweet memories,

that somehow drowned and went away,

but i slowly unravel all of them and i really wish they stay,

remember when we met,i gave you that stupid bracelet,



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on Oct. 15 2013 at 8:57 pm
Orchid.cereal GOLD, Bend, Oregon
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im knew at this, i tried writing a poem it didnt really work.But thanx!

on Oct. 14 2013 at 11:31 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

It's alright. I mean, there's nothing really WRONG with this poem..... It just lacks a bit of.....eh......I don't really know, but this poem feels like it's missing something....... I give it a 3.5/5.